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Flown Away Too Soon

June 10, 2010
By themusicalfruit SILVER, Tulsa, Oklahoma
themusicalfruit SILVER, Tulsa, Oklahoma
6 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
When I look at my room, I see a girl who loves books. - John Green


You slipped away when I closed my eyes
Tip-toed out the door and turned the lock
You didn't look back
Spreading your arms, you flew

Met James Brown at the golden gates
At a quarter 'til noon with a gleam in your eye
You chimed, "I'm home."
We whispered, "Farewell."

No more danger or strife
Safe, you are, from harmful hands
In the land of love
There you are

I slumber at noon without you
Your magic lingers like a stranger in the dark
The morphine of my life
Flown away too soon

I wake to find you out of my life
The sheets are still warm from where you slept
The boogie is gone
But The King lives on



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on Jun. 14 2010 at 2:24 pm
themusicalfruit SILVER, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
When I look at my room, I see a girl who loves books. - John Green

Wow! Thank you so much!

on Jun. 14 2010 at 11:44 am
thezebrasgray PLATINUM, Taylorsville, Utah
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Amazing, amazing, amazing!  I love it!  I'm rating it 5 of 5!

Shahed GOLD said...
on Jun. 13 2010 at 8:50 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

You're so welcome!

on Jun. 13 2010 at 7:06 pm
themusicalfruit SILVER, Tulsa, Oklahoma
6 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
When I look at my room, I see a girl who loves books. - John Green

Aw, thank you so much. 

Shahed GOLD said...
on Jun. 13 2010 at 12:45 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

I opened yours because I live in Tulsa too, but after I read it Im so glad I did, Like the title, and its really good!

 

Check Out my work .. You did really good up there!


on Jun. 13 2010 at 12:16 am
themusicalfruit SILVER, Tulsa, Oklahoma
6 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
When I look at my room, I see a girl who loves books. - John Green

 Michael Jackson. He's my main muse!

on Jun. 12 2010 at 9:11 pm
Vivallaa PLATINUM, NYC, New York
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Favorite Quote:
\'Before you stalk and overrun, you can\'t devour anyone.\'

Wow! Who is this about?