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Anti-Valentine's

May 30, 2010
By taytay07 PLATINUM, Southwick, Massachusetts
taytay07 PLATINUM, Southwick, Massachusetts
23 articles 6 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you more than I can ever scream." ♥ (BVB)


Red roses
dried and wilted.
Boxes of chocolates
now melted
and smeared
all overthe marble counter tops.
Years' worth of cards,
shredded to bits,
tossed here and there.
A love,
once
one so true
ain't nothin' now.
We're nothing.
This is all we have left
of what we once were.
So blinded by love,
caught up in the moment.
How cliche.


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on Jul. 6 2010 at 8:11 am
taytay07 PLATINUM, Southwick, Massachusetts
23 articles 6 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you more than I can ever scream." ♥ (BVB)

I guess so..Haha And I shall do just that..keep writing that is! :D Miss ya to.

on Jul. 6 2010 at 1:05 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

so i guess this is where we go our seperate ways. keep writing! I'm really gonna miss you captain....

on Jul. 3 2010 at 9:22 pm
taytay07 PLATINUM, Southwick, Massachusetts
23 articles 6 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you more than I can ever scream." ♥ (BVB)

Yeah...huh...I guess you're right. :l Hahaha my mistake

on Jul. 3 2010 at 4:42 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
What the front door.

thing captain sure. you know,when you say you try to write how you feel, you're just saying what I just said, so I'm not exactly sure what your point was captain.

on Jul. 3 2010 at 12:34 pm
taytay07 PLATINUM, Southwick, Massachusetts
23 articles 6 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you more than I can ever scream." ♥ (BVB)

Really? I've never been told that before...I just try to write how I feel. Again, thank you! :))

on Jul. 3 2010 at 12:07 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
What the front door.

you have a way of emotioning your capture. welcome you're captain.

on Jul. 3 2010 at 8:51 am
taytay07 PLATINUM, Southwick, Massachusetts
23 articles 6 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you more than I can ever scream." ♥ (BVB)

Haha Thank you! :) I was feeling rather bitter the day I wrote it.

on Jun. 28 2010 at 1:06 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
What the front door.

I love the negative pessimistic bitter anitsocial grudge-carrying angry-thing. 5 stars captain.