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June 9, 2010
By _Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
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_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
9 articles 7 photos 436 comments

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- I stare danger in the face and giggle<br /> - Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference<br /> -R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)<br /> -Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

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I'm drowning in my favorite songs
Maybe I'll forget the wasted days
I spent with him
The beat plays to my twisted thoughts as it tries to wash away the face consuming my thoughts.

© Liaz M., Vineland, NJ

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Crazywolfiegirl2 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 25 2021 at 5:59 am
Crazywolfiegirl2 PLATINUM, Kington, Other
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There is something infinitely healing in the repeated refrains of nature—the assurance that dawn comes after night, and spring after winter. —Rachel Carson

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Love this!
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 18 2010 at 3:09 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

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what she said...i really like this captain. i love the metaphors-if that's what you call them. do your dance.
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 29 2010 at 11:04 am
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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&quot;The goal isn&#039;t to live forever, but create something that will.&quot;<br /> &quot;If you wanna go, baby let&#039;s go; if you wanna rock, I&#039;m ready to roll.&#039;&#039;<br /> &quot;No one ever said it&#039;d be easy. They just said it&#039;d be worth it.&quot; &lt;3

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woww. i luvvv this. itz short, yet so powerful. also, i can completely relate(: amazing jobb. definetly 5 starz
haventy0uheard PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 22 2010 at 1:05 pm
haventy0uheard PLATINUM, Kings Park, New York
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I really, really liked the emotion in this. Awesome job. Write on!<3
_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 6:45 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle<br /> - Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference<br /> -R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)<br /> -Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

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thanks, yeah i didn't like that second line at first either but it just seemed like it had to go there
squidzinkpen SILVER said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 6:04 pm
squidzinkpen SILVER, Buffalo, New York
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&quot;The Irish gave the Scots the bagpipes as a joke, but the Scots haven&#039;t seen the joke yet&quot;- Irish Proverb

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Me encanta much! The second last line looked a tad awkward, but the words were great! I totally get the meaning behind the poem!
_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Aug. 6 2010 at 4:27 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
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- I stare danger in the face and giggle<br /> - Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference<br /> -R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)<br /> -Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

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thank you, and this poem isn't really about anyone. But my friends gave me the idea
alaskatrailmutt said...
on Aug. 6 2010 at 8:43 am
alaskatrailmutt, Jefferson, Maryland
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I liked it you very easly compacted a universal feeling. I tryed that lol. I failed. XD Oh well. Was this bout u or a friend?
_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Aug. 5 2010 at 10:20 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
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- I stare danger in the face and giggle<br /> - Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference<br /> -R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)<br /> -Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

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thank you so much :)
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on Aug. 5 2010 at 7:11 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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wow this is fabulous!! so much packed in so little:) this is really really good!! awesome job. btw i really really like your art-your awesome:)
xcrayolaxstormx SILVER said...
on Jul. 17 2010 at 10:08 am
xcrayolaxstormx SILVER, Coventry, Rhode Island
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This was good. I don't think this is emo at all. Haha, those people don't know what they're talking about. But, I digress. It was short and sweet, and I liked how there wasn't a particular rhyme scheme, but it still flowed really well. Keep up the great work :)
_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Jul. 15 2010 at 8:01 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
9 articles 7 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle<br /> - Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference<br /> -R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)<br /> -Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

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thank you =)
Lost_In_LALA_Land BRONZE said...
on Jul. 15 2010 at 6:30 pm
Lost_In_LALA_Land BRONZE, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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The akward moment when you look at someone and you realize what you could be, what you should be, and also that it will probaby never happen...&lt;/3

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One just cause you like and write stuff like this does NOT mean you are EMO but same story with me... I always write very dark and stuff but hey I think its good :) And second that was REALLY good I liked it :)
_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Jul. 8 2010 at 3:50 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
9 articles 7 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle<br /> - Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference<br /> -R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)<br /> -Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

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one of my friends favorite poems but when a teacher read to half of the 7th grade people began screaming i was emo. hope ya'll are nicer. thanks for reading