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You're So Far But Feel So Close

June 12, 2010
By indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
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You're so amazing and that is why
It pains me that you're so far
But soon I'll be up flying in the sky
To be right there where you are

I love the little ways you show you care
Through all the things that you do
Like you'll always be right there
And I hope you know I will be too

So admirable and something new
You intrigue me with all that you do
And seriously who would've knew
I could find someone like you

Meeting you I feel as happy as can be
I'm excited to see what may be unfurled
But no matter what comes of you and me
I just hope you find happiness in this world

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