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In This Hallway

June 11, 2010
By kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
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kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
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"love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop."

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I’m sitting here
In this hallway
So empty,
Almost hollow
Doing my best
Not to Swallow
What could be my last breath
This house though
It surrounds me
With life
Why Can’t I feel it
Why does it not touch me
Could Maybe
I be
Too Far Gone
Beyond numb
Forever lost
To this inside force
That chokes me
That makes it so hard
For me to just be

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I wrote this at exactly 4:12 in the morning so I'm going to go back and edit later :)
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kenna2013 GOLD said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 10:44 pm
kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop.&quot;

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Thank you so much..It means so much for me as an artist to know I have effected a reader :) I would really appreciate some more feedback from you on some of my other pieces
inksplatters21 SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 2:56 pm
inksplatters21 SILVER, Mason, Ohio
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&quot;Character is how you live when no one is watching.&quot;

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Makes me worry about you.  Your poetic words just about moved me to tears--very touching.