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June 11, 2010
By shy_anna_13 BRONZE, Plainfield, Ohio
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i wish-

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Stars make me smile
If only for a while

because when I see a shoting star
I remember back far

Just laying there
With space to stair

When there was a thing with you and me
something I thought was always meant to be.

I remember sitting on your car
looking at that beautiful star

but things are like that no more
now all that’s left is an open sore.

© Rosanna S., Phoenix, AZ

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i wrote this... yeah so i hope you like it.
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Sissybug2012 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 12 2010 at 11:10 pm
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM, Union, Missouri
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this is so sad. i love it tho. u said so much in just a few sentences. very nice....