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Favorite Song MAG

February 27, 2010
By rebecca-rose GOLD, Shrewsbury, New Jersey
rebecca-rose GOLD, Shrewsbury, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
“Every thorn is just part of the stem to a beautiful rose” - R.R.


My favorite song can't be heard
On a radio or iPod.
You can't buy it, can't download it,
This song comes straight from God.

The chorus is a few faint chirps
With the wind chiming in
Then comes a verse of gentle rain
Tapping on metal tin

The chorus repeats with crunching leaves
And this time the wind is stronger.
Then with the next verse there is snow
Which means warmth's not much longer.

Finally the a cappella solo
Which is lead by a few soft purrs.
Then more chime in with growls and barks
As the mood begins to stir

The next verse is my favorite
It gives me a warm feel.
Waves are crashing, sea gulls are squawking
The sound is so surreal.

Alas, the song continues,
In fact it never ends.
Like we're holding down “repeat”
To hear my favorite song again


The author's comments:
Wrote it in the summer when I just felt a sudden extreme love of nature and its sounds

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on Feb. 26 2012 at 10:10 am
rebecca-rose GOLD, Shrewsbury, New Jersey
18 articles 12 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Every thorn is just part of the stem to a beautiful rose” - R.R.

Thank you!

on Feb. 16 2012 at 9:15 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.<br /> --Eleanor Roosevelt

Cool--like the sound of nature, controlled--or written---by God is your favorite song. Great poem~