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Mood Rings and White Roses

June 22, 2010
By MumblingMelanie DIAMOND, Jackson, Missouri
MumblingMelanie DIAMOND, Jackson, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Don't be a victim; be a titan.


Without a doubt the saddest thing I’ve seen in a long time
Are the people who walk down the street
Where has the brilliance gone?
Is it locked in the asylums and in the hospitals?
For I can’t seem to find a certain someone anymore
They’re all gone
The moon shine, the psychopaths
It’s all been overcome by the sun
The darkness is not as dark as it once was
And the light is a dull, motel room lamp
For without the brilliance
Without the madness
This world is a canvas
With no artist.


The author's comments:
A quote by the lovely Allen Ginsberg:
"Follow your inner moonlight; don't hide the madness."

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on Nov. 28 2010 at 7:35 pm
MumblingMelanie DIAMOND, Jackson, Missouri
79 articles 0 photos 210 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be a victim; be a titan.

I sincerely appreciate it, once again!

:3


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on Nov. 14 2010 at 12:14 pm
AshTree SILVER, Clarksville, Tennessee
7 articles 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live your art" -made this one up myself. Simple, but true.

I love this! last four lines are my favorite. Keep writing, because this was great!

on Jul. 19 2010 at 9:44 pm
MumblingMelanie DIAMOND, Jackson, Missouri
79 articles 0 photos 210 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be a victim; be a titan.

One thousand thank yous!

=D


on Jul. 19 2010 at 7:39 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

i enjoyed reading this :) it makes total sense in the end. i liked it, good job!!

on Jul. 19 2010 at 4:49 pm
MumblingMelanie DIAMOND, Jackson, Missouri
79 articles 0 photos 210 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be a victim; be a titan.

Thank you so much.

It means a lot to me. :)


on Jul. 18 2010 at 11:54 pm
thoughtsofmine, Honeybrook, Pennsylvania
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this is so amazing. you have an extraordinary mind and i enjoyed this greatly. and i'm pretty sure i completely understood what you meant. beautiful. keep writing.

on Jul. 18 2010 at 11:38 pm
MumblingMelanie DIAMOND, Jackson, Missouri
79 articles 0 photos 210 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be a victim; be a titan.

Awww, thanks! =D

I really, really appreciate it.

Thanks again. :)


on Jul. 18 2010 at 11:09 pm
MelanieLouise PLATINUM, Plymouth, Minnesota
37 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
to live a creative life, we must lose our fear of being wrong

i cannot stop reading this. it is...i can't even think of a good word for it. i totally get what you are saying and i love it.

 

the last four lines are probably my favorite.

 

keep writing

 

Always,

Mel