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A Letter to my Lover

June 24, 2010
By sunkissed-devil14 SILVER, Battle Lake, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"I believe in everything until it's disproved. So I believe in fairies, the myths, dragons. It all exists, even if it's in your mind. Who's to say that dreams and nightmares aren't as real as the here and now?"~John Lennon

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Just seeing you smile
makes my head spin.
The way you light up a room
just by walking in.
The way you make my sun shine,
when all i see are storms.
I'll hold you close forever
because I can't stand to see you go.
So please, if it's not too much,
Stay with me, till the sun stops shining.
Because when my love ends for you,
is when every single star in the sky..
GOES BLIND

© Carissa G., Aberdeen, WA

The author's comments:
i wrote this about my boyfriend (we have just recently broken up) soo yeah i hope if you read this and you have a special someone, you should love them until all the stars go bline ;)
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