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Affinity Theory

July 6, 2010
By Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.


Forever behold the fountain of love
But where is love now and where will it go?
What happened to the fountain of love?
What happened to the ebb and flow?
Why don’t the waters quench my thirst?
Why do the waters run in place?
Why do these relationships always explode?
Why do they tend to blow up in my face?
What happen to or forever hold your peace?
Why couldn’t she have held her peace?
Why is she suddenly on his mind?
Why is he down on one knee?
Who really benefits from this fountain?
When will I get to take a drink?
Why is she wading in my waters?
Why is she wearing my wedding ring?
When will I find my true love?
When will my prince come along?
Why cant he be as handsome as the last?
And what took the fountain so long?
Who would’ve thought it’d turn out like this
The fountain of love I forever behold
You know that when we say our vows
He’ll be watching from the window



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on Jul. 31 2011 at 11:36 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

ahhh, youre so awesome captain.

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jul. 31 2011 at 9:31 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

I toatlly agree with this poem! LOVE IS CONFUSING! 

PS: I like your poem too! A lot. :)

I totally relate to it and it's written very well! 

Nice job. :)


on Sep. 28 2010 at 7:42 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

"I've recently had one explode, if it hasn't it will soon." vs. (typical feminie response) "george, we have to stay together and make this work."

on Sep. 27 2010 at 11:29 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

...may I ask in what ways?

on Sep. 27 2010 at 3:17 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

well you are, but see, the topic ceases to remind me of itself. you just seem like a boy in that comment up there.

on Sep. 27 2010 at 11:26 am
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

Oh, I see, I am of no significance to you.

on Sep. 24 2010 at 8:58 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

actually that last comment had nothing to do with us, though just a thought that occured to me.

on Sep. 24 2010 at 10:45 am
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

Hm...well, I predicted wrong, but I don't know if yo uwere being sarcastic or not...

on Sep. 23 2010 at 1:54 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

I looooove how you jsut predict the future captain. i'll try to remeber you're a girl.

on Sep. 22 2010 at 9:50 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

As always, very interesting, and I found the story kind of like a dream.  But I like when you say "why do these relationships always explode?" because I've recently had one explode...or if it hasn't, it will soon.

on Sep. 13 2010 at 8:49 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

(breathes deepily) Savage Things (the poem title) + ism,a random-"suffix", if you will.

on Sep. 13 2010 at 8:40 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Real helpful ;)

on Sep. 13 2010 at 7:51 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

Savage (+ism)Things

on Sep. 13 2010 at 7:43 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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What's savagism?

I wonder if you're like this in real life? Just a musing.


on Sep. 13 2010 at 7:33 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

i thought savagism was pretty foward straight. i didnt realize we were playing a game. school me captain.

on Sep. 13 2010 at 5:56 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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You sure don't play your own game very well ;)

I really like the Savage things one, it's strange and confusing, and When it Rains.  I really do think all of your poems have the soul-squirmy feeling to them <Shrugs>


on Sep. 13 2010 at 5:49 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

right......so......is there any one that stands out specifically? when someone says my work is this or that it just sounds so vague. that's like saying your favorite food is.......food.

on Sep. 13 2010 at 5:18 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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But why should I be specific, Alice? This is Wonderland, after all.

For all that you know, I could have gone through every single one of them.


on Sep. 13 2010 at 5:08 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

thank you so much for reading and commentating. could you please be more specific. i know you said "all" and I''m interested in which "alls" you're talking about. is there a specific one you can think of? I love the inputism.

on Sep. 13 2010 at 4:53 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Your poetry is so interesting.

It squirms as I read it, it doesn't like analyzation. Actually, all of your poems do that. I can't figure out what they mean, or what they mean to me.

Rocks.