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River of Peace

July 6, 2010
By MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
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MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I realize that life is risks. It&#039;s acknowledging the past but looking forward. It&#039;s taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven.&quot; <br /> -The Dead Tossed Waves.

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A river of peace
Is a river of love
It is a roller coaster of gratitude,
Laughter and joy.
A river of peace
Is beautiful
Diamonds sparkling in the sun
Millions upon millions
Consisting of happiness and fun.
A river of peace
Is consistent
It is the train
That carries me through my journey
Stretching on for miles and miles
Rippling over sediments and rocks
That remain determined in their place.
A river of peace
Is natural, casual yet invincible
A forever remaining beauty
Smooth and silky always on the run.

© Keri-Lynn R., Germantown, NY

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MercedesXO DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 1 2010 at 7:52 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I realize that life is risks. It&#039;s acknowledging the past but looking forward. It&#039;s taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven.&quot; <br /> -The Dead Tossed Waves.

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really? thank you so much. that really means a lot to me, and i'm glad you liked it:) i'm gunna go check out your work! thanks again!
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 2:03 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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This is so amazing!!! i love it!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!
Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 10:25 am
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

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This was a joy to read; it made me smile. There is nothing more satisfying to me than absolute peace, a river of peace.