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103.) Sand

July 6, 2010
By trblue GOLD, Richmond, Virginia
trblue GOLD, Richmond, Virginia
14 articles 7 photos 141 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Too often we lose sight of life's simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you, it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown. It only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm and slap that mother@#?!&* upside the head. "


Grains of sand
Bloiwn melted and
molded in to a
heart as deep as any
treasure.


stolen by
you and shatterd in to
millions of pices.
leaving me in a pain
in the pit of my
stomach. leaving holes in my
heart when I cry. That dosent help.
the memories of you that burn my retina.

I cry my rivers and lick my
wounds. trying to forgive, but can i realy move on for U and how i love U.


The author's comments:
"for U and how i love U." i just added that in tell me what you think.

i just wrote it down i my book as it's better from my norm. stuff or not.

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trblue GOLD said...
on Jul. 18 2011 at 3:47 pm
trblue GOLD, Richmond, Virginia
14 articles 7 photos 141 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Too often we lose sight of life's simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you, it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown. It only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm and slap that mother@#?!&* upside the head. "

thank you for your comments

on Jul. 28 2010 at 2:16 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

This is so descriptive!!! Amazing word choice!! i love it!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!