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My Battered Soul

July 12, 2010
By TerraTAZz GOLD, Sapulpa, Oklahoma
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Nobody goes through life without a scar.<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -carol burnett

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Lord Fix my broken heart and,
mend my battered Soul,
Lord shield me form the things I have been told.

Unfaithful is to humans,
as numbers are to Math,
but lord at times it's so hard to follow your Path.

Help me make the right decisions Lord, in a way only you could in vision.

I ask my lord for your forgiveness in everything i do, because in everything i do, in the end, it will all lead me back to you.

© Julia K., Nagykovacsi, Hungary

The author's comments:
I had a dream one night that i was sitting at an old oak desk, one i do not own, and i was writing this poem. So i woke up, and wrote it down. I am not sure why i dreampt of this, but i like it. i hope you do too.
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TerraTAZz GOLD said...
on Aug. 6 2010 at 4:52 am
TerraTAZz GOLD, Sapulpa, Oklahoma
18 articles 3 photos 86 comments

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Nobody goes through life without a scar.<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -carol burnett

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Thankss bunches for commenting on my work:)
TerraTAZz GOLD said...
on Aug. 6 2010 at 4:51 am
TerraTAZz GOLD, Sapulpa, Oklahoma
18 articles 3 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nobody goes through life without a scar.<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -carol burnett

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Thanks for reading it and commenting:)
TerraTAZz GOLD said...
on Aug. 6 2010 at 4:51 am
TerraTAZz GOLD, Sapulpa, Oklahoma
18 articles 3 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nobody goes through life without a scar.<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -carol burnett

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Thanks for reading and commenting it:)
TerraTAZz GOLD said...
on Aug. 6 2010 at 4:50 am
TerraTAZz GOLD, Sapulpa, Oklahoma
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Nobody goes through life without a scar.<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -carol burnett

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Thannkk you for your comment i Really really appreciate it!!! :)
Chloe_ BRONZE said...
on Aug. 4 2010 at 10:49 pm
Chloe_ BRONZE, San Antonio, Texas
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Wow thats really cool how you wrote it and got the idea i guess is the word! great job!

 

crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 4 2010 at 8:44 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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Wow thats so cool how u wrote the poem!! its just so unique and motivaitonal!! If you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!! thanks and ur sooo good!!!
Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 4 2010 at 12:33 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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This is a heartfelt and meaningful prayer that was full of truth. Thanks for writing it!
PoeticTouch GOLD said...
on Aug. 4 2010 at 8:02 am
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like like like!! great one...check out some of my work please:)