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Five Thousand Years MAG

June 21, 2010
By aelixs BRONZE, Bear Creek, North Carolina
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aelixs BRONZE, Bear Creek, North Carolina
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"I sound like a cliche and smell like cheap alcohol. My hair is nearly always a mess and I feel awkward in my skin. I know what I want; it's getting it that confuses me sometimes" - NotJaneToday

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I could spend five thousand years
in this hotel room tonight
if you asked me to
listening to the shower running
television rumbling behind my head
automobiles on the freeway
pool light across the ceiling
thinking, breathing, feeling
memorizing your face with my fingernails
I can touch your mouth and catch your breath in my chest
when you exhale
I could spend five thousand years
in this hotel room tonight
just ask me to

© Tiffany A., Southaven, MS

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