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Broken hearted gravesite

July 23, 2010
By Tiffany_Avalos GOLD, Lorain, Ohio
Tiffany_Avalos GOLD, Lorain, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"LIfe is worth a few bumps and brusies."


I like to thank the broken hearted,
for being brave and great,
the things you went though,
is very hard to take,
Your heart didn't spit in half,
even though you felt it,
you took a huge arrow of fire,
to your heart and melt it,
now your heart is taking,
a lot of guilt and pain,
i'm sorry that you feel this way,
but you will rest again,
but now you must hope for,
the new love to come,
to fill in the bad,
to just make it num,
So don't say your last goodbyes,
to the standing stone,
he'll last in you forever,
and your never be alone.

The author's comments:
To all that lost their love.

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on Sep. 20 2010 at 8:03 pm
Tiffany_Avalos GOLD, Lorain, Ohio
14 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"LIfe is worth a few bumps and brusies."

Thank you. i never will, writing is my whole life. i wrote this because i felt this way once a pond a time, most of the things i write is base on what i feel, i guess you can call it inspiration. :) But each memary, each feeling, i don't ever want to forget.  

on Sep. 20 2010 at 4:14 pm
i love your peom.... never give up on your work... your good be the best.... you can because one day it might... just the best thing ever... i sounds like you never really fell in love you just thought you did.... and if you did sorry....