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July 29, 2010
By Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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Somewhere around three a.m. in the morning
I’ll overdose on what I mistook to be
Just a simple strawberry punch fruit drink.
Within a few minutes my friends will notice
That I haven’t gotten up to dance yet.
When they come to check on me
they’ll also notice the slight fever.
Once I collapse on the floor,
all the teens will freak out,
And call an ambulance.
By the time they show, I’ll be unconscious.
They’ll give me an I.V. and rush me to the hospital
A few hours later my parents will get
A long distance call from an officer saying
Their daughter died shortly after being carried
To the hospital from a party
Due to circumstances still in question.

© Nick C., Boca Raton, FL

The author's comments:
i dont know why people think i write about real life experiences. this did NOT happen to me, my fellow captains. if it did, i just might not be here. i hope it has a sarcastic 'oh well' slightly dry and bitter sort of feel to it.i also hope you like.
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Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 27 2014 at 6:55 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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It needed like one more line. I have the other version somewhere.
Miss_Orange SILVER said...
on Jun. 25 2014 at 9:34 am
Miss_Orange SILVER, Makati, Other
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&quot;I&#039;m OK, I&#039;m Fine and I&#039;m alright are the greatest lies people tell each other everyday.&quot; By Me.

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it isn't finished yet? hm, interesting...
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 24 2014 at 5:26 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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I actually dont think I finished this one. Oh well. Such a waste.
Miss_Orange SILVER said...
on Jun. 23 2014 at 4:30 am
Miss_Orange SILVER, Makati, Other
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&quot;I&#039;m OK, I&#039;m Fine and I&#039;m alright are the greatest lies people tell each other everyday.&quot; By Me.

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nicely put, and that is the very reason I do not go to parties! nah, not really but it is one asied frome being anti-social!
Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Sep. 24 2011 at 5:48 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love. <br /> Henry Drummond

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LOL! (giggle) :)
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 22 2011 at 11:03 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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Hello to u and ur dictionart.i will be back shortly with my microwave oven
Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Aug. 3 2011 at 2:06 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love. <br /> Henry Drummond

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Don't look at me. I just used the internet. 
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 2 2011 at 10:16 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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A dictionary! WOW!!!! my dear Aderes, you always come in handy.
Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 3:49 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love. <br /> Henry Drummond

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Dictionary definition from Merriam-Webster: 

Cynical: a : contemptuously distrustful of human nature and motives

b : based on or reflecting a belief that human conduct is motivated primarily by self-interest

Melancholic: a sad or gloomy mood (my own,I believe) :)

Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 31 2011 at 11:43 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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cynical and melancholic=what do you mean.?
Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jul. 31 2011 at 9:13 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love. <br /> Henry Drummond

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That doesn't make sense! was not supposed to have a question mark. Sorry about the typos! :)
Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jul. 31 2011 at 9:12 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Well, a lot of your poetry is very cynical and melancholic.

How do you mean? That doesn't even make sense?  What are you trying to ask? Do you mean What you are trying to ask?

Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 31 2011 at 6:48 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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ohhh! it is that i love the inputism. it is that you use the words melancal and cyncholic alot. how do you mean?
Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jul. 28 2011 at 10:01 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love. <br /> Henry Drummond

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Cynical and melancholic but so very true. Tons of teens die and mess up their lives this way. Sometimes, it makes me so glad that my religion doesn't allow to drink. Plus, I have an addictive personalty so alcohol+me=bad combination 
Niftygrrl BRONZE said...
on Aug. 21 2010 at 11:56 am
Niftygrrl BRONZE, Norfolk, Virginia
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&ldquo;We are all a little weird and life&#039;s a little weird, and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness and call it love.&rdquo;- dr suess<br /> <br /> &quot;Saying &#039;I notice you&#039;re a nerd&#039; is like saying, &#039;Hey, I notice that you&#039;d rather be intelligent than be stupid, that you&#039;d rather be thoughtful than be vapid, that you believe that there are things that matter more than the arrest record of Lindsay Lohan. Why is that?&#039; In fact, it seems to me that most contemporary insults are pretty lame. Even &#039;lame&#039; is kind of lame. Saying &#039;You&#039;re lame&#039; is like saying &#039;You walk with a limp.&#039; Yeah, whatever, so does 50 Cent, and he&#039;s done all right for himself.&quot; <br /> &mdash; John Green

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You should check out my work =]

Considering No one has haha

Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 20 2010 at 11:32 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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oh...I get it. merci tres beacoup captain.
Marlyre PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 20 2010 at 9:00 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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this has the life of some brief newspaper clipping, or like the report that they would give to the parents... good stuff
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 20 2010 at 6:42 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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merci captain, though this isnt the version i thought i posted. they actually put this one up instead of the one i was talking about. the last line after that was supposed to be "its okay, you can laugh, its funny." but like i said, that was another version.
Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 20 2010 at 6:18 pm
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You know what I thought when I read this clever poem? I thought, "this had a sarcastic 'oh well' slightly dry and bitter sort of feel." So well done with it. Come to think of it, it was very dry, but I applaud you for your verbal performance.
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 20 2010 at 6:08 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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impressed? okay....merci captain...I guess.