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This Is Not Revenge. This Is An Applied Science

July 29, 2010
By Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.


No one is going to save you
So feel free to rot here
Along with the termites
And the holes in the wood…
They seem to be pretty good at it.
You wont know when the sun sets
So if you said to someone “please help,
she left me stranded here all night.”
Well technically, you’d be lying.
Don’t worry about any wolves,
The bears killed them all off…
…I guess this is the part where
You say something clever like
“is this really what you want
To have on your conscious?”
Or “this will haunt you forever.”
Oh, I see, you want to apologize?
Hmmm…I have a better idea.


The author's comments:
So...there was this couple that went on a date at a national park and she was like "oh, so you're cheating on me?" so she chained him to a rock or something and then there was this bear...

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on Jul. 28 2011 at 7:30 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

merci captian. im glad i reminded you of something.

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jul. 28 2011 at 5:11 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

Again, the cynicism reminds me of House

Nice poem. :)


on Oct. 2 2010 at 6:54 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

it's who you are. merci "my dear".

J'aime que tu as dis.


s3r3nd1p1ty said...
on Oct. 2 2010 at 6:38 pm
s3r3nd1p1ty, Longwood, Florida
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you say captain alot....WHY?

Great poem though :)

its cold, but at the same time, full of emotion. I LOVE your stuff


on Oct. 1 2010 at 11:19 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

hmmm....the x-factor? here we go......

on Oct. 1 2010 at 8:22 pm
Karma_Chameleon SILVER, English, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
To be able to say "I love you" one must first be able to say "I" - Ayn Rand

I suppose I was a tad bit vague there - only a tad mind you. ;-) Basically, you poem has a naturally smooth flow and rythm, was greatly entertaining, and contained that "X-Factor" which I love.

on Oct. 1 2010 at 3:01 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

ahh,you're so vague captain. what do you mean exactly? merci for the comment. i really appreciate your input. the previous sentence is not just some reoccuring theme predestined to floating aroung in this ever so poorly-defined enigma.

on Sep. 30 2010 at 10:39 pm
Karma_Chameleon SILVER, English, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
To be able to say "I love you" one must first be able to say "I" - Ayn Rand

There is something about this poem, something I can't quite put my finger on - well, I'm not sure how to articulate it properly, so I'll just say that I loved it.

on Sep. 14 2010 at 2:17 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

I was wondering where you came from. i suppose i should reread you.....

on Sep. 14 2010 at 2:16 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

thank you captain!thats nice to know. do your dance.

on Sep. 14 2010 at 11:08 am
distressed_cinderella PLATINUM, San Leandro, California
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Favorite Quote:
" You can't make something stay that wants to go. You can only love what you have while you have it"

Ahh but it was implied

on Sep. 13 2010 at 8:50 pm
FlyleafFreak DIAMOND, Loveland, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"I have faith in fools;self confidence my friends call it"~Edger Allan Poe
"In this world of infinite insanity, your friends are the best psychiatrists you will ever have."~Me

Wow, very good. I really like your style, it's inspiring :P

on Aug. 29 2010 at 9:08 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

but..........you didnt say anything.

on Aug. 29 2010 at 4:32 pm
distressed_cinderella PLATINUM, San Leandro, California
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Favorite Quote:
" You can't make something stay that wants to go. You can only love what you have while you have it"

Nuff said :D

on Aug. 28 2010 at 9:50 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

i'm glad no one can tell when i should be bitter, merci captain.

on Aug. 25 2010 at 4:46 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

This made me giggle sheepishly.

on Aug. 22 2010 at 7:16 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

actually thats not at all what it means but i do love your sense of humor captain.

on Aug. 22 2010 at 5:42 pm
distressed_cinderella PLATINUM, San Leandro, California
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Favorite Quote:
" You can't make something stay that wants to go. You can only love what you have while you have it"

Not exactly sure what that's sposta mean, but i will take it as ya love my sense of humor....

on Aug. 21 2010 at 1:38 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

man youre awesome captain. i think i've just found myself on the other side of the plasma.

on Aug. 21 2010 at 12:26 am
distressed_cinderella PLATINUM, San Leandro, California
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Favorite Quote:
" You can't make something stay that wants to go. You can only love what you have while you have it"

This poem satisfies my evil side...muahahah oh and I've now developed a new insult : Hey, I hope you rot in wood before you can even say 'clark we need you'