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satisfaction

July 26, 2010
By Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"when you cry, do you waste your tears?" Madonna


eyes cradle the curl of her fingers
wound in a loose spring around the
barrel of a wooden pencil.
what sight cannot provide is the
physical satisfaction she craves--
eyes recieve, gifts small they hand out
in the form of appreciation, but this
is pleasure to one side of the party...
the giver knows not of the thoughts
lips would speak for eyes can't.



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on Aug. 25 2010 at 12:31 am
chrisbriones GOLD, Anaheim, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I believe nothing can be justly and completely explained by words."

This has touched me even to the deepest crevices of my being. I cannot even begin to describe how this makes me feel. I yearn for more.

You are truly deserving of being called a poet--one who awakens the emotions. Thank you..


on Aug. 20 2010 at 5:36 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

I love this captain. its simple and awesome and deep. do your dance captain.

on Aug. 20 2010 at 11:36 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Wow...

This is very....deep...and imaginative. You've created several images in these few lines. Very powerful. Keep writing.!