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The Rules of Flamenco
Francesca was the girl 
 with the long brown hair
 dark and rich like 
 mulch after a thunderstorm
 
 boys told her she was pretty
 but she didn’t hear
 a word of their talk  
 she had heard it all before
 
 decided she wanted to 
 run away at sixteen
 she was ready for Life
 without rules and ties
 
 then she realized there 
 was no such thing
 
 got locked up in jail 
 manslaughter or something 
 
 Mama wanted her back home
 it had been eleven years
 Francesca didn’t want to go
 but she did anyway 
 
 At home she found
 an old woman 
 she didn’t recognize
 wrinkles everywhere
 
 She met the old woman
 They talked for awhile
 Learned some things
 They didn’t know before
 
 The old woman was a dancer
 Flamenco to be exact
 Spinning and stomping
 In deep red costumes
 
 Dancing made her free
 when she was young
 and full of the same fiery spirit
 that caused her to have a baby
 At just nineteen
 
 Francesca found out
 she loved the old woman
 she was the old woman
 in some strange way
 
 
 
 Now she was twenty seven
 Much more beautiful
 than she was at sixteen
 though a little less pretty
 
 She and the old woman decided
 they were free as free could be
 they spent all their money
 on a one roomed space
 
 Mirrors lined every wall
 The floor was scarred
 dented and scuffed
 with the marks of dancing shoes
 
 They hung a sign
 “Alvarez’s Dance Studio” 
 in clean black block print
 above the large glass windows
 
 At first mostly young girls
 from around came 
 trying to support 
 the crazy pair that taught
 
 Then the young girls grew
 into the fiery spirited youths
 that needed flamenco
 To stomp out their anger
 but more of their fear
 
 Francesca and the old woman
 Taught these girls for years
 The girls loved them
 and couldn’t bear to go 
 
 So they didn’t
 They grew into mothers
 Flamenco dancing mothers
 That bred flamenco dancing daughters
 
 Francesca and the old woman
 Loved the girls and women
  they taught to have 
 power and grace
 
 Francesca was proud of herself
 and happy to follow the rules
 of flamenco 
  it made her free

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wow, this is really great! i love the way you told a story about this girl, Francesca. It was well formatted. My favorite part was the ending stanza.
Check out some of my work, too if you'd like. Great job on this! Keep writing!(:
 
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I really like this! =]
Now i think i should learn to dance haha