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my date with bud

August 4, 2010
By push4ice SILVER, Schaumburg, Illinois
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dont forget the heat
anticipation
the little green leaves smiling
the warmth of that summer day
dont forget how nervous you were
as you lifted it to your mouth
the burning sensation
the feeling of weightlessness
dont forget the regret
the feeling of patheticness
the feeling that of self hate
dont remember what you were trying to forget
on that fateful summer day
with weed

© Elise S., Clarksville, MD

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push4ice SILVER said...
on Sep. 1 2010 at 9:19 pm
push4ice SILVER, Schaumburg, Illinois
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yes, i hate to admit it was from experience, what can i say? s*** happens, thanks for the comment :)
Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 29 2010 at 2:23 pm
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Very meaningful piece. The situation was described with poetic perfection. It seems like you were really there (were you?). So well done! I applaud you!
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on Aug. 28 2010 at 8:41 pm
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its cute ! i like it
woundedcondor GOLD said...
on Aug. 28 2010 at 7:35 pm
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nice poem ;]