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In The Brush

August 5, 2010
By Katie_Grey DIAMOND, Leipsic, Ohio
Katie_Grey DIAMOND, Leipsic, Ohio
58 articles 10 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
Difficult is not impossible - Relient K, "Hope for Every Fallen Man"


If all I had was love, would I still be lovely?
If all I gave was love, would you give up on me?
-House of Heroes, "Love is for the Middle Class"


I stand in the field where I work,
The wheat is soft against my skin
I clasp a strand of that barely
in my hand,
but when I open my clenched fist
it is nothing but dust.
A voice says,
“Hide in the brush by the river, down in the brush by the river.”

I look down at my clumsily large feet,
mice scamper around them,
I reach down and catch one,
so small, it squirms, writhing violently
in my hand,
I don't want to hurt it
but a moment later it is still.
A voice says,
“Hide in the brush by the river, down in the brush by the river.”

I look across the field where I work,
I see a pretty face skipping toward me,
Beautiful, soft curls bouncing around it,
She stops just feet from me,
so I clasp that natural silk
in my hand,
but a look of shock runs across her visage
and she disappears amongst the wheat.
A voice says,
“Hide in the brush by the river, down in the brush by the river.”

I crouch in the brush by the river,
it scratches roughly into my skin.
I see my safety, my friend-
I feel smooth, cold metal-
“I hid in the brush by the river, I stayed in the brush by the river.”


The author's comments:
Another school project. I had to write a poem off Of Mice and Men by John Steinbeck from one of the characters perspectives. Those of you who have read it might know which character this is.

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uhilu25 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 9 2010 at 3:31 pm
uhilu25 BRONZE, Austin, Texas
3 articles 3 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
i am not bound to win,but i am bound to be true.i am not bound to succeed,but bound to live up to what light i have. -abraham lincon

ah ive read the book like this but i forgot the name >.< great detail youve got talent. read my stuff?

 


on Sep. 8 2010 at 7:32 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1632 comments

Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

I, also, read Of Mice and Men for school. I loved this poem and thought the repition of the lines had a great effect. Well done, your creative writing teacher must be wonderful.

on Aug. 31 2010 at 9:41 pm
Katie_Grey DIAMOND, Leipsic, Ohio
58 articles 10 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
Difficult is not impossible - Relient K, "Hope for Every Fallen Man"


If all I had was love, would I still be lovely?
If all I gave was love, would you give up on me?
-House of Heroes, "Love is for the Middle Class"

yes. very much. I'm excited to take on the challenge and improve my writing. I know it will be difficult, but it will be fun :)

. said...
on Aug. 31 2010 at 9:11 pm
ARe you looking forward to it?

on Aug. 31 2010 at 8:31 pm
Katie_Grey DIAMOND, Leipsic, Ohio
58 articles 10 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
Difficult is not impossible - Relient K, "Hope for Every Fallen Man"


If all I had was love, would I still be lovely?
If all I gave was love, would you give up on me?
-House of Heroes, "Love is for the Middle Class"

No, only two for my last school year were for projects. But since I'm taking a creative writing class this year, I have a feeling a lot more will be for school.

. said...
on Aug. 31 2010 at 8:28 pm
Are a lot of poems you write for school projects?

on Aug. 31 2010 at 5:24 am
Katie_Grey DIAMOND, Leipsic, Ohio
58 articles 10 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
Difficult is not impossible - Relient K, "Hope for Every Fallen Man"


If all I had was love, would I still be lovely?
If all I gave was love, would you give up on me?
-House of Heroes, "Love is for the Middle Class"

well, I don't understand why it repeated itself. my apologies for that.