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August 11, 2010
By romance_lover GOLD, Edmonton, Other
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“I'm Disappointed” she whispered
my nose wrinkled at the word
her face was framed
with a tortuous sadness

YELL AT ME!
Scream all the things i know i am,
banish me to nothingness
tell me I'm worthless
just please
don't be sad

My mistakes are mine
don't tell me it is your fault
don't ask me why i do this to you
I'm doing it for me

don't cry
pout
or ask me for explanations
dont tell me to stop
i won't

I'm a lost cause
a beer bottle floating to sea
I'm already gone

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-Duckie- GOLD said...
on Aug. 26 2011 at 7:59 pm
-Duckie- GOLD, West Fargo, North Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
Your heart is a weapon the size of your fist. Keep fighting. Keep loving.
-Anonymous

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Oh, I love this one!!! It really spoke to me... thankyouthankyouthankyou
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 24 2011 at 11:46 am
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

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this is really good! i read one other story of yours, and thought is was really cute. it just gets better with u:D  this is very deep, and I love it!
romance_lover GOLD said...
on Jun. 23 2011 at 9:11 pm
romance_lover GOLD, Edmonton, Other
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thanks ! :)
Dancing2222 GOLD said...
on Jun. 19 2011 at 11:23 pm
Dancing2222 GOLD, Sandy, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Be yourself, everyone else is taken."
"Imagination is more important that knowledge" -Albert Einstein
"Don't ever frown, you never know who's going to fall in love with your smile."

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I can't believe nobody's commented on this yet! That was awesome! Great job!