September 10, 2010
By bound4life4ever PLATINUM, Jamaica, New York
bound4life4ever PLATINUM, Jamaica, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Never take life seriously. Nobody gets out alive anyway.

Why do you need to be like this love?
You don't know it...
But your hurting me inside.
You said goodnight
But it don't sound the same
As yesterday
I knew that was the last time...
You would say it like that

I loved you...
Our hands clasped together
Under the rain my love
You were looking for me
Behind a white forest
With a hollow tree
Please come find me

Even if I was cold in the snow
Your hug would feel like a furnace
Against my body

But I know
your not looking for me anymore
my love dream ends here
But my love for you doesn't

Every tear i let fall
Isn't even for the pain
I'm feeling inside
Its for the pain that
I know you
DON'T feel from losing me

I always dreamed with love
You holding me in your arms
But that wont be done

Why do you make me
Die inside like this?
You made me feel like a fool

Why did you tell me
From the start
That you didn't love me?!
You made me dream
Impossible things

But I see now
The only thing you wanted
Was to play with my feelings

You just hurt me inside
Didn't you notice?!

I try not to care anymore
But the pain keeps coming
Do whatever you want
I don't care

Just please
Please stop hurting me

The author's comments:
this is based on personal experience... it just came to me one day... so i hope you like it=)
please comment!

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This article has 2 comments.

kieran said...
on Jul. 2 2016 at 8:35 pm
I think we can ALL relate! You're bleeding through your pen, no worries, no mess, probably. Having felt physical pain for most of the last 15 years, I know pain sucks. Hopefully somebody out there can alleviate your pain, or simply NOT hurt u anymore. Sure u never intentionally hurt somebody!

on Oct. 15 2010 at 1:23 am
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Wow! This is really great! It really reminds me of my poem Silly Little Puppet! If you could check out my poems and comment that would be great I'd love your feedback and I really think you could relate to some of them =D