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September 15, 2010
By amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

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It'll be okay
Don't worry
Don't take your life away
Don't f*** your life
Over this one girl
You'll find one again
You'll have the world

Breathe
Deep Breaths
Relax
You have time
You have the rest of your life
Don't end it here

There is no love
I let it go
I'm drowning
Falling
Dying

© Dat L., Worcester, MA

The author's comments:
Wrote it to make myself feel better cuz I asked this girl that I really liked out and she said no, not major, but I'm not the best with immediate rejection.
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amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 25 2010 at 7:00 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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Yes I did:)  Haha.  She's still a really good friend though.  Kinda got distant after I asked, but it's all normal again:)
hxcRocker DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 25 2010 at 4:29 am
hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
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Good poem. Writing is a great outlet for all emotions. If it's the girl i think your talking about. You found a better one with the same name. (;