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For You:)

September 15, 2010
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"


The way your eyes shine, you make the stars jealous
The warmth in your smile, can bring the universe to it's knees
You are beauty, in the purest of forms
You make me happy, and bring me up when I'm down
You keep me here, floating in the clouds


The author's comments:
Another for all the girls out there;)

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on Nov. 25 2010 at 6:57 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

This one is actually one of my favorites, it's really simple.  But it makes me happy every time I think about when I wrote it:)

on Nov. 25 2010 at 4:25 am
hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
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I liked how you focused on the sky for your comparisons but it's missing your normal element that sets it apart from all the other poems like this.