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The Most Beautiful Place

September 15, 2010
By amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

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The most beautiful place is
Where our lives are simple, endless
In a lush, immense field
Where grass and flowers grow tall
A single tree stands in the center
Of a wide, breathtaking lake
I sit there, in the center
Under that single tree
Swirls of clouds float above me
While fish glide among lush vegetation
The sky of the purest, lightest blue
And the stars shone bright of the purest white
The birds trill cheerfully and swim in the sky
This is the most beautiful place in my minds eye

© Haley L., Anchorage, AK

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Wrote it for an English class journal entry. Not my best.
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amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 25 2010 at 6:55 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream&quot;

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Every time I write about some beautiful place I imagine this place.  It frustrates me sometimes because I always come back to this place in my head
hxcRocker DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 25 2010 at 4:20 am
hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
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i can picture you place and it is indeed, beautiful.