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isnt that low?

September 29, 2010
By kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
22 articles 5 photos 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller


What is wrong with me?
I want to ask
To question to their face…
What would they say?
I burn to know the answer
But dread to feel the ache
What have I done wrong to you?
What I have gotten myself into?
You feel something you call hate…
But wait.
How can you hate someone you don’t know
To me that kind of just seems…low.


The author's comments:
Hate is a strong word, you have to truly know someone to hate who they are. Please comment!

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on Mar. 16 2011 at 9:35 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

The last line is so... right, I guess :)

Such a great poem, and so many people relate to it. That is quite the accomplishment, kmarie.


on Nov. 6 2010 at 9:42 pm
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
23 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
IMPOSSIBLE TO KNOCK ME OFF MY ROAD TO SUCCESS

tis peice reallly wants me want to know what ppl no now. how do you judge ppl by the way tey look how you hate someone you dont knw????????????if only they would understand...love it

on Oct. 26 2010 at 8:38 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
22 articles 5 photos 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

THANK YOU! you have no idea how much it means to me that you would take time to read and comment on all my stuff! I will stay updated with all of yours ;) and ya...I wrote this because well alot of people said they dont like me, or even hated me...and i didnt even know them at all

on Oct. 26 2010 at 3:55 pm
Hummingbird GOLD, Berryton, Kansas
16 articles 0 photos 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is either a daring adventure or nothing. -Helen Keller

 I wish more people would have the chance to read this beautiful poem because it is so true. You are so right, because how can you hate someone if you don't know them? So true, and so many people could benefit from this poem- and I wished that more people actually lived their life this way- Not passing harmful judgements. Nice Job!

on Oct. 19 2010 at 9:06 am
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
22 articles 5 photos 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

thanks soooo sooo sooo much! (: it means alot ! :)

on Oct. 18 2010 at 11:49 pm
mwahxandxmwa SILVER, Melbourne, Other
6 articles 0 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Silence is golden...duct tape is silver" - a random T-shirt

You are very talented and also very intracate writer, you don't just plainly state your feelings you ask people to venture into there own minds it is very beautiful and extremely clever! mwah :D

on Oct. 16 2010 at 11:48 pm
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
225 articles 4 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
"One day, your life will flash before your eyes; make sure it's worth watching."

NO PROBLEM! AND THANKS! WHENSOMEONE IS THAT GOOD ITS WORTH UR TIME TO READ IT ALL

on Oct. 16 2010 at 11:45 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
22 articles 5 photos 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

Thank you so much for commenting on all my stuff! :) I will keep checking out all your work :) thanks again! (:

on Oct. 16 2010 at 3:12 pm
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
225 articles 4 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
"One day, your life will flash before your eyes; make sure it's worth watching."

SHORT AND SWEET  AND BEAUTIFUL  GREAT EMOTION TOO

on Oct. 10 2010 at 6:35 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
48 articles 0 photos 1752 comments

Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

I wouldn't say it if it wasn't true:)

on Oct. 10 2010 at 6:30 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
22 articles 5 photos 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

really?? thanks again! you have no idea how much that means to me (:

on Oct. 10 2010 at 4:04 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
48 articles 0 photos 1752 comments

Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

No problem:) If I had room I'd favorite this.

on Oct. 10 2010 at 2:03 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
22 articles 5 photos 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

Thank you! sooo much!

on Oct. 9 2010 at 9:42 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
48 articles 0 photos 1752 comments

Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

This was beautiful. I love the questions, they really fit the mood, and it've very relatable.  Great rhythm and flow, nice and smooth. Great job:)

on Oct. 6 2010 at 8:23 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
22 articles 5 photos 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

THANK YOU! (:

on Oct. 6 2010 at 9:05 am
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
22 articles 5 photos 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

Thank you so much! (: I know, and sometimes I guess i am a hypocrit because i dont always give people of good chance before i get to know them, but i really do try my best...I think that really if we all just took the time to get to know eachother nobody could really hate

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on Oct. 6 2010 at 7:41 am
AlyssaNeal, Spotsylvania, Virginia
0 articles 0 photos 9 comments
I love how truthful this poem is, everyone now-a-day's is so judgemental, and dont like you, for you. If people just stopped, and listened, and talked to you, they would realize how great you are. Great Poem, I love your writing!

on Oct. 5 2010 at 6:01 pm
bethy4916 BRONZE, Paonia, Colorado
2 articles 0 photos 9 comments
Truthful... I like that!

on Oct. 2 2010 at 9:13 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
22 articles 5 photos 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

Thanks for the comments guys!!! Be sure to check out my other work and I will do the same (:

MRose911 GOLD said...
on Oct. 1 2010 at 7:09 pm
MRose911 GOLD, Paradise, Utah
17 articles 10 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No boy is worth crying over and the one who is won't make you cry." - Sarah Kane

I totally get what your saying!! It's almost like I'm experiencing the same exact thing!!!