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September 27, 2010
By fearlesslybeyourselff SILVER, Solon, Ohio
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fearlesslybeyourselff SILVER, Solon, Ohio
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There is only one you for all of time. Fearlessly be yourself.

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it hurts me so much
to see the way you look at her.
so obviously in love
feelings get more insecure.
it doesn't add up
at least not in my head
how she interests you more
this just goes unsaid
i may be too much
come on a bit too strong
but i always mean well
you just take it so wrong
my chance is now gone
but how dumb are you
to pass up a girl
who would always remain true
my dreams are now nightmares
because it shows me
everything that could of happened
you and i turned to we
just a blur in the past
in a wink of an eye
you fall out of my life
without saying goodbye.

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fatesknocking GOLD said...
on Oct. 27 2010 at 1:30 pm
fatesknocking GOLD, Solon, Ohio
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Prayers go up and blessings come down.

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this is beautiful. you have such a talent my friend.
fearlesslybeyourselff SILVER said...
on Oct. 24 2010 at 7:27 pm
fearlesslybeyourselff SILVER, Solon, Ohio
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There is only one you for all of time. Fearlessly be yourself.

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ughhh writing is my escape!
kmarie14 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 24 2010 at 6:43 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

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I KNOW! :(
fearlesslybeyourselff SILVER said...
on Oct. 23 2010 at 2:55 pm
fearlesslybeyourselff SILVER, Solon, Ohio
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

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There is only one you for all of time. Fearlessly be yourself.

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its so hard!
fearlesslybeyourselff SILVER said...
on Oct. 23 2010 at 2:54 pm
fearlesslybeyourselff SILVER, Solon, Ohio
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is only one you for all of time. Fearlessly be yourself.

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thank you so much
Ducttape.isnt.tear.proof GOLD said...
on Oct. 23 2010 at 1:55 pm
Ducttape.isnt.tear.proof GOLD, Eureka, California
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&quot;I&#039;m selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can&#039;t handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don&#039;t deserve me at my best.&quot; <br /> &mdash; Marilyn Monroe <br /> &quot;A wise girl kisses but doesn&#039;t love, listens but doesn&#039;t believe, and leaves before she is left.&quot; <br /> &mdash; Marilyn Monroe<br /> &quot;I am good, but not an angel. I do sin, but I am not the devil. I am just a small girl in a big world trying to find someone to love.&quot; <br /> &mdash; Marilyn Monroe <br /> &quot;Who said nights were for sleep?&quot; <br /> &mdash; Marilyn Monroe <br /> &quot;Sex is part of nature. I go along with nature.&quot; <br /> &mdash; Marilyn Monroe

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Wow this just takes my breath away
kmarie14 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 22 2010 at 9:41 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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wow. I can totally relate to this poem too....it  reminds me of my last year love life...itotally understand </3
fearlesslybeyourselff SILVER said...
on Oct. 21 2010 at 3:03 pm
fearlesslybeyourselff SILVER, Solon, Ohio
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im glad you understand!
fearlesslybeyourselff SILVER said...
on Oct. 21 2010 at 3:03 pm
fearlesslybeyourselff SILVER, Solon, Ohio
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There is only one you for all of time. Fearlessly be yourself.

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thank you so much! it means a lot to me!
thewriteidea DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 10 2010 at 1:42 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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&quot;Don&#039;t cry that it&#039;s over, smile because it has happened.&quot;

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this is so touching. you are such a good writer and i totally envy you! i love this

rate/comment on some of my work too if you'd like. keep writing

alihadley14 GOLD said...
on Oct. 9 2010 at 2:56 pm
alihadley14 GOLD, Glasford, Illinois
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amen. </3