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September 27, 2010
By fearlesslybeyourselff SILVER, Solon, Ohio
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so here is the story
you've heard it by now
you said you were sorry
for coming around
You said you were sorry
for making me cry
you said you were sorry
for passing me by
you said you were sorry
for treating me like this
you said you were sorry
for not giving me a kiss
you said you were sorry
for the pain you have caused
you said you were sorry
for putting me on pause
you said you were sorry
for previous times
you said you were sorry
for making me rhyme
you said you were sorry
for beating me down
you said you were sorry
for being a clown
you said you were sorry
you say it once more
you said you were sorry
you've said it before

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EnigmaticBeing PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 9 2011 at 2:47 pm
EnigmaticBeing PLATINUM, Santa Barbara, California
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&quot;Be careful what you set your heart upon - for it will surely be yours.&#039;<br /> James A. Baldwin

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As much as I enjoyed this poem because of how relatable it was and how much depth it has the amount of redundance that is present makes the piece seem more infantile. I'd also like to point out that even though there is a rhyme scheme present the fact that the poem has no separation makes it look a little messy. Of course that's probably just the perfectionist in me talking but still. Overall I like this poem but I think there is room for improvement. Please keep writing :]
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 1 2011 at 7:17 pm
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
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To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

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this was great. quite repetetive...... but wonderful... perfect image
dorathy GOLD said...
on Dec. 6 2010 at 10:18 am
dorathy GOLD, Aroura, Colorado
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omqq!!i love this poem i understand alot like you never here sorry enough..=|]
loveee7 DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 16 2010 at 6:49 pm
loveee7 DIAMOND, San Pedro, California
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&quot;If Your One In A Million Than There&#039;s A Million Other People Just Like You.&quot;

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Oh my gosh! I love this! Its people like you who understand my emotions!
fatesknocking GOLD said...
on Oct. 27 2010 at 1:34 pm
fatesknocking GOLD, Solon, Ohio
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i love this so much! i like the repitition and the way it flows. </3
SaMiLoVe97 SILVER said...
on Oct. 25 2010 at 1:35 pm
SaMiLoVe97 SILVER, Okawville, Illinois
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wow. I love this. ALOT. lol really good work. keep writin'(:
kmarie14 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 24 2010 at 6:24 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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:) anytime!
fearlesslybeyourselff SILVER said...
on Oct. 23 2010 at 2:56 pm
fearlesslybeyourselff SILVER, Solon, Ohio
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haha its so great to get this type of feedback thans!
Ducttape.isnt.tear.proof GOLD said...
on Oct. 23 2010 at 1:52 pm
Ducttape.isnt.tear.proof GOLD, Eureka, California
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I couldnt of said it better its like you fallow my life lol
kmarie14 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 22 2010 at 9:38 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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I.love.this. One of my favorite poems and I think its because of the fact its so relatable i really really really really like it:) i think you get it by now but...i like this peom! :) thank you for posting! check out my work if u get time?