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Dancing in the rain

October 6, 2010
By blackraindrops BRONZE, Paradise, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, its about learning to dance in the rain."
"The reason people hold onto memories so tight is because they are the only things that don't change, even when everything else does."

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Outside with you
The rain pouring down our faces
The pitter patter of the falling rain
Becomes the song we dance to
As you twirl me around
And dip me down
Our eyes meet and I am enchanted
At that moment I can hardly breath
For fear that my heart might burst
With exuberance and adoration
As we spin
round and round
Everything else just disappears
Dancing with you through these vacant streets
I have never felt so alive
The only thing that matters in the world
Is right here
Me and you
Dancing in the pouring rain

© Carly M., Hopedale, MA

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Ducttape.isnt.tear.proof GOLD said...
on Oct. 23 2010 at 1:46 pm
Ducttape.isnt.tear.proof GOLD, Eureka, California
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I love this it reminds me of where i live and i can so relate to this :)