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October 7, 2010
By pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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a poem of love is hard to write
for love is cased in a bottle of fright
the heart is a fragile, gentle thing
and when i see your face it starts to sing
a touch on the arm, a kiss on the cheek
your blue eyes make me feel weak
my stomach flutters and my palms sweat
how nervous you make me-i dont think you get.

© Louise T., Marblehead, MA

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pinkypromise23 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 5 2011 at 2:50 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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thank you!           
OriginalCarbonation GOLD said...
on Feb. 4 2011 at 11:19 pm
OriginalCarbonation GOLD, Naperville, Illinois
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dream as if you&#039;ll live forever<br /> live as if you&#039;ll die tomorrow

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first six lines really get me, they're so well written!
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 2 2010 at 1:37 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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haha thanks:D
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 1 2010 at 1:10 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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.....anyway....I love this captain. its short,simple and-well i know you know that cause you wrote it but- just do your dance captain.
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 1 2010 at 1:10 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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.....anyway....I love this captain. its short,simple and-well i know you know that cause you wrote it but- just do your dance captain.
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 8 2010 at 12:49 pm
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM, Jackson, Ohio
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Life&#039;s not about how hard you can hit; it&#039;s about how hard you can get hit and keep moving forward, how much you can take and keep moving forward. That&#039;s how winning is done.

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yeah. i hardly ever get on now though. it'd be easier for me some other way.
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 1 2010 at 1:40 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i dunno...cant we just comment? its eaiser for me in a way
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 1 2010 at 7:19 am
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM, Jackson, Ohio
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Life&#039;s not about how hard you can hit; it&#039;s about how hard you can get hit and keep moving forward, how much you can take and keep moving forward. That&#039;s how winning is done.

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3:08 but idk if there's time diffrences or not?
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 29 2010 at 2:44 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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yeahh. well idk when you get out of school soo
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 29 2010 at 1:26 pm
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM, Jackson, Ohio
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if you get on here before i get out of school tell me and we can go to the fourm and talk easier and faster than commenting

 

 

jhsironmen12 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 28 2010 at 7:42 am
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM, Jackson, Ohio
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Life&#039;s not about how hard you can hit; it&#039;s about how hard you can get hit and keep moving forward, how much you can take and keep moving forward. That&#039;s how winning is done.

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well idk i guess i'm sorry he thinks it's stupid
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 27 2010 at 1:57 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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dont be sorry haha its not anyones fault
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 27 2010 at 12:43 pm
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM, Jackson, Ohio
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Life&#039;s not about how hard you can hit; it&#039;s about how hard you can get hit and keep moving forward, how much you can take and keep moving forward. That&#039;s how winning is done.

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oh I'm sorry...
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 26 2010 at 1:18 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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sortt of. but he thinks writing is easy and stupidd.
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 26 2010 at 12:44 pm
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM, Jackson, Ohio
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yes I am. don't be chicken! j/k does he know you write?
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 25 2010 at 2:17 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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no your nott haha
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 25 2010 at 2:00 pm
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM, Jackson, Ohio
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Life&#039;s not about how hard you can hit; it&#039;s about how hard you can get hit and keep moving forward, how much you can take and keep moving forward. That&#039;s how winning is done.

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fine. but you know i'm right
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 25 2010 at 1:32 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i dunno...i dont wanna lol
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 25 2010 at 8:10 am
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM, Jackson, Ohio
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Life&#039;s not about how hard you can hit; it&#039;s about how hard you can get hit and keep moving forward, how much you can take and keep moving forward. That&#039;s how winning is done.

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I think he would. let him read it and we'll see whose right:)
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 23 2010 at 9:08 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

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i dunno...