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October 11, 2010
By Ducttape.isnt.tear.proof GOLD, Eureka, California
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Ducttape.isnt.tear.proof GOLD, Eureka, California
12 articles 4 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best."
— Marilyn Monroe
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left."
— Marilyn Monroe
"I am good, but not an angel. I do sin, but I am not the devil. I am just a small girl in a big world trying to find someone to love."
— Marilyn Monroe
"Who said nights were for sleep?"
— Marilyn Monroe
"Sex is part of nature. I go along with nature."
— Marilyn Monroe

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I've prayed each day for the love I deserved
Walked down the road of a voice unheard
Then came my chance to prove I was worthy of this love
We fit so right, like a hand to a glove
A style so like mine, this man can't be real
Exactly what I asked for, truly the real deal
Love is not easy to hold onto, only easy to gain
For a love like this you must experience some pain

© Lindsey Dennis, Marblehead, MA

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Ducttape.isnt.tear.proof GOLD said...
on Oct. 22 2010 at 6:27 pm
Ducttape.isnt.tear.proof GOLD, Eureka, California
12 articles 4 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best."
— Marilyn Monroe
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left."
— Marilyn Monroe
"I am good, but not an angel. I do sin, but I am not the devil. I am just a small girl in a big world trying to find someone to love."
— Marilyn Monroe
"Who said nights were for sleep?"
— Marilyn Monroe
"Sex is part of nature. I go along with nature."
— Marilyn Monroe

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its so ok and idk really how to write it just happenes
Ducttape.isnt.tear.proof GOLD said...
on Oct. 22 2010 at 6:27 pm
Ducttape.isnt.tear.proof GOLD, Eureka, California
12 articles 4 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best."
— Marilyn Monroe
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left."
— Marilyn Monroe
"I am good, but not an angel. I do sin, but I am not the devil. I am just a small girl in a big world trying to find someone to love."
— Marilyn Monroe
"Who said nights were for sleep?"
— Marilyn Monroe
"Sex is part of nature. I go along with nature."
— Marilyn Monroe

View profile
thanks i worte it in 8th grade
Ducttape.isnt.tear.proof GOLD said...
on Oct. 22 2010 at 6:26 pm
Ducttape.isnt.tear.proof GOLD, Eureka, California
12 articles 4 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best."
— Marilyn Monroe
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left."
— Marilyn Monroe
"I am good, but not an angel. I do sin, but I am not the devil. I am just a small girl in a big world trying to find someone to love."
— Marilyn Monroe
"Who said nights were for sleep?"
— Marilyn Monroe
"Sex is part of nature. I go along with nature."
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will do and thanks idk it just comes to me
Hannahgee6 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 22 2010 at 5:01 pm
Hannahgee6 BRONZE, Greensburg, Kentucky
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therefore do not worry about tomorrow. for tomorrow will worry about itself. each day has enough trouble of its own.
-jesus

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amazing!!! :) i love it! so original. i really need some feedback. can u check out some of my work?

thanks! and again, good job!!!!!!

 

blackraindrops BRONZE said...
on Oct. 21 2010 at 4:47 pm
blackraindrops BRONZE, Paradise, California
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Wow i really love this! It has a very beautiful flow. I know its annoying when people say this but I just posted some of my work do you think you could take a look at it and give any possible feedback? that would be great (: I love your poem!
fearlesslybeyourselff SILVER said...
on Oct. 21 2010 at 3:23 pm
fearlesslybeyourselff SILVER, Solon, Ohio
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There is only one you for all of time. Fearlessly be yourself.

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this is absolutly amazing! i could not have written this better if i spent years trying. well done!