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But You Didn’t MAG
I took a slice of moon and put it my hair
But you didn’t say
I glowed.
I scattered the stars in my eyes,
But you didn’t say
I shone.
I splashed the blue ocean water on my face,
But you didn’t say
I glistened.
I told you “I love you” yesterday,
But you didn’t even
listen.
© Anonymous
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beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 16 2012 at 10:50 am
Very cool~ it was so great.
inkers said...
on Jul. 28 2011 at 12:25 am
Lovely rhyme scheme. This is really good! <3
FreeFallenx0 GOLD said...
on Dec. 4 2010 at 8:48 am
wow this is so beautiful. i really like it. keep it up :)
ShenelleCrystal SILVER said...
on Oct. 4 2010 at 2:11 pm
even though this is a short poem I love this SOOO much ! Its so nice and I loved every line :) please comment and rate my work ? :)
StandardToaster PLATINUM said...
on May. 29 2010 at 11:44 pm
this is AMAZING!!! I love it. check out my work?
princessness_16 SILVER said...
on Apr. 26 2010 at 7:42 am
aww. thats so sad. but the imagery in the poem is amazing.
Sweatheart SILVER said...
on Feb. 12 2010 at 8:08 pm
This is so beautiful I am absolutely speechless this poem almost made me cry
just_because said...
on Jan. 31 2010 at 6:51 pm
It's...
It's...
It's...
Well, quite simply put, it's beautiful. I'm quite literally speechless.
So simple and yet so fitting.
I love it.
It's...
It's...
Well, quite simply put, it's beautiful. I'm quite literally speechless.
So simple and yet so fitting.
I love it.
iAmTheStardust PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 31 2010 at 11:49 am
this poem really touches me because it has happened to me before. you did an amazing job on this. keep writing!
the_Horsegirl SILVER said...
on Jan. 31 2010 at 10:26 am
Wow. Touching.
taintedannex GOLD said...
on Jan. 31 2010 at 5:53 am
So simple yet so profound and touching
My simple three words? I love it.
My simple three words? I love it.
Jane said...
on Dec. 13 2008 at 11:41 pm
Beautiful.
annexgreyz said...
on Nov. 6 2008 at 6:47 am
its an amazing poem, i absolutely love it. :]
shelby_love said...
on Oct. 30 2008 at 4:38 pm
This is darling, I love it. Simple but completely true. It gave shiver's, like I'd experenced it before.
4lyfebasketball said...
on Oct. 21 2008 at 7:42 pm
I love this poem! its really relates to what happens in love
happygirl said...
on Sep. 18 2008 at 9:46 pm
Wow! This is awesome!
Tweedle Dee said...
on Sep. 16 2008 at 1:00 am
beautiful... incredibly touching
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