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Fallen

November 14, 2010
By Anonymous

Look at me and watch me cry
See me tremble as I die
Hurting inside
Now I've fallen and cannot fly

For now I lay never found
Crying and hurting on the ground
I have fallen, I can't breathe
I hear myself the dreadful sound.

© Anonymous

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I was really sad one day because somebody hurt me.
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This article has 16 comments.

Strawberrysunshine22 GOLD said...
on Mar. 5 2011 at 1:30 pm
Strawberrysunshine22 GOLD, Askov, Minnesota
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thanks to yall for the genorous complements.  Ive  never been told these things before and to let yall know im not emo i just write this way lol :)
Strawberrysunshine22 GOLD said...
on Dec. 12 2010 at 2:56 pm
Strawberrysunshine22 GOLD, Askov, Minnesota
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Thank you and i do feel alot better :)
ipodchick12 said...
on Nov. 19 2010 at 9:27 am
this peom is really deeep and its a really awesome poem, i wish there was more to it though
TheAurorasFall PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 18 2010 at 5:22 pm
TheAurorasFall PLATINUM, Dover, Pennsylvania
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oops i ment learn
TheAurorasFall PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 18 2010 at 5:21 pm
TheAurorasFall PLATINUM, Dover, Pennsylvania
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i can relate to this. it seems it's always the same person who hurts me. but i apparently never leanr xD
Savannainthesky GOLD said...
on Nov. 17 2010 at 12:42 pm
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wow that was amazing and very touching you have a very strong talent
MelanieElizabeth_18 GOLD said...
on Nov. 17 2010 at 9:31 am
MelanieElizabeth_18 GOLD, Gatlinburg, Tennessee
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I love this! its so simple yet gets the message through, its the perfect length. you have so much talent.. great poem
Abbz7193 GOLD said...
on Nov. 16 2010 at 9:23 pm
Abbz7193 GOLD, Denver, Colorado
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That is really good! Its... its beautiful. Wow and i thought action spoke louder than words but wow I was wrong. The saying should be this poem speaks louder than words...
misstywaterfall SILVER said...
on Nov. 16 2010 at 12:55 pm
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this is a relly nice poem i love it :)
lexii94 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 16 2010 at 8:45 am
lexii94 BRONZE, Houston, Texas
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really really good :)
Strawberrysunshine22 GOLD said...
on Nov. 15 2010 at 8:29 pm
Strawberrysunshine22 GOLD, Askov, Minnesota
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Thank you guys for all the nice comments. I was kind of scared to put it on here because everyones sounds so much better than my poems. I was really intimadated. lol but thanks again for the wonderful comments
Dren12 said...
on Nov. 15 2010 at 8:03 pm
Dren12, Brevard, North Carolina
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short but very meaningful....keep writing
Life_or_Death GOLD said...
on Nov. 15 2010 at 7:20 pm
Life_or_Death GOLD, Troy, Michigan
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I like it. you can feel your sadness. Feel better:)
xXxdancing_for_rainxXx said...
on Nov. 15 2010 at 7:17 pm
xXxdancing_for_rainxXx, San Pedro, California
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It's beautiful... I love it :)
PoetryButterfly123 said...
on Nov. 15 2010 at 6:47 pm
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nice poem:)
Kay Morzak said...
on Nov. 15 2010 at 12:09 pm
It's short but i think that that's part of the beauty of it. It flows, and i think that a lot of people can relate to it. :)