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Different This Time

November 24, 2010
By amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

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This time it seems different
Somehow,
This feeling I feel
Inside
Of what some say hold
Love,
When I held her in my arms,
Death
Took her away from me.
Swept
Her from my grasp, but
The
Moment she left, I felt nothing.
Life
Happens just as often as death.
From
Hawaii to somewhere with worse weather
Me

And you will be together, forever.

© Gabrielle A., Pensacola, FL

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amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 24 2011 at 2:08 am
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream&quot;

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Thanks:)  I'll check your stuff out as soon as I can!! I'm excited :)  I really like your work:D
CarolynQ GOLD said...
on Jun. 21 2011 at 1:58 pm
CarolynQ GOLD, Manalapan, New Jersey
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I like the way you set this up... Interesting style, sort of sad, but it's a great piece. Check some of my new work out :)
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 12 2011 at 6:31 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream&quot;

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Yepp:)  The style is definately different and a bit off from what I normally write.  But I like it:)
hxcRocker DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 11 2011 at 2:15 am
hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
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One of your more unique pieces. Very interesting. Surprised there's not anymore comments