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November 28, 2010
By NeverFallTooHard PLATINUM, Hartford, Wisconsin
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Reason is powerless in the expression of Love.~ Rumi<br /> Realisim, in painting, is what one wants to see, not what they really see. ~ Janet Fish

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I lOve yoU,

i alWayS wILl.
DeEp insIdE,
I'Ll alWAys bE wiTh yoU.


dEepEr thAn tHaT,
i wIll AlwaYs bE AppArT oF yoU,
aS You ShaLl remAin a PaRt oF ME.

© Justin R., Angola, IN

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Randomly capitalized letters + love to my Uncle *May he rest in peace = Poetry. ?
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AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 4 2011 at 8:40 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
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Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

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Im so sorry about your Uncle...This poem is nice though. I think that the capitaliztions are a good idea. For people that just skim poems, it will make them slow down, and actually take the words in.
MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy SILVER said...
on Dec. 26 2010 at 5:06 pm
MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy SILVER, Chardon, Ohio
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I think the randomly capitolized letters have a pretty cool effect. May I pay my respects to your uncle?