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November 28, 2010
By NeverFallTooHard PLATINUM, Hartford, Wisconsin
NeverFallTooHard PLATINUM, Hartford, Wisconsin
24 articles 5 photos 98 comments

Favorite Quote:
Reason is powerless in the expression of Love.~ Rumi
Realisim, in painting, is what one wants to see, not what they really see. ~ Janet Fish

I lOve yoU,

i alWayS wILl.
DeEp insIdE,
I'Ll alWAys bE wiTh yoU.

dEepEr thAn tHaT,
i wIll AlwaYs bE AppArT oF yoU,
aS You ShaLl remAin a PaRt oF ME.

The author's comments:
Randomly capitalized letters + love to my Uncle *May he rest in peace = Poetry. ?

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on Jan. 4 2011 at 8:40 pm
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Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

Im so sorry about your Uncle...This poem is nice though. I think that the capitaliztions are a good idea. For people that just skim poems, it will make them slow down, and actually take the words in.

on Dec. 26 2010 at 5:06 pm
MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy SILVER, Chardon, Ohio
7 articles 56 photos 356 comments

Favorite Quote:
"One heartbeat."

"Our scars remind us of where we've been; they don't dictate where we're going."
-SSA David Rossi, Criminal Minds

I think the randomly capitolized letters have a pretty cool effect. May I pay my respects to your uncle?