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Gone and Empty

December 19, 2010
By Lilacs_Smell_Wonnerful PLATINUM, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
Lilacs_Smell_Wonnerful PLATINUM, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
40 articles 2 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons make grape juice. Then sit back and watch everyone look at you in amazement. :)

I feel like my heart is gone
Replaced with a sack of dirt and ashes
Old brown dirt and dusty ashes

I feel like my dreams are gone
Replaced with other people's expectations
Golden-shiny expectations

I feel like my spirit is gone
Replaced with robotic machinery
Yes sir, no ma'am robotic machinery

I feel like my love is gone
Replaced with a wind-me-up soul
Tick, tock, tick, tock, wind-me-up soul

I feel like my hope is gone
Replaced with a stack of broken promises
Crumpled and stained broken promises

I feel like myself has gone
Embarked on a permanent vacation
So long, I won't see you later, permanent vacation

I feel deserted, alone, afraid.

I feel broken, demolished, unmade.

I feel...


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asofnow GOLD said...
on Dec. 27 2012 at 7:16 pm
asofnow GOLD, Troy, Michigan
18 articles 0 photos 208 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing gold can stay ~ Robert Frost

I like your poems, a lot :) They really make me ponder.