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For Once Right About Love

January 3, 2011
By Almost_Lover GOLD, Mission, South Dakota
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Being wrong is hard to admit
Wrong about your love
Wrong about our days spend together
Wrong about you'll never tear my heart in half
Wrong about the time on the bench
Wrong about the time we share wound stories
Wrong about the love
I'm right about still loving my enemy
I'm right about stitching my heart together for some else to tear it half again

© Rachel P., Wailuku, HI

The author's comments:
I noticed enough though my heart get ripped in half, I still fix it to get ripped in half again. What can I say "I desperate for love".
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