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January 10, 2011
By Eagle PLATINUM, Park City, Utah
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"I don’t have pet peeves — I have major psychotic f**king hatreds!"
George Carlin

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I am from the crystal clear stream in the mountains
I’m the breeze on the beach with the smell of the water on the air
I’m a brick red redwood tree standing perfectly still
I’m the fire that can destroy all
I’m the clear white in the world
I’m the innovative
I’m the your favorite song playing all around
This is me

© Dat L., Worcester, MA

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Eagle PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 24 2011 at 6:05 pm
Eagle PLATINUM, Park City, Utah
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"I don’t have pet peeves — I have major psychotic f**king hatreds!"
George Carlin

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It's fine that's what most people think so i'm used to it.
CharlesDickens SILVER said...
on Jan. 24 2011 at 5:57 pm
CharlesDickens SILVER, Georgetown, Texas
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"I do not agree with what you have to say, but I'll defend to the death your right to say it."
~Voltaire

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I am SO sorry, I was trying to get the message through, but it didn't work, I kept typing it up differently.  and it sent them all.  I hope you can forgive me.
Eagle said...
on Jan. 23 2011 at 8:58 pm
No               
CharlesDickens SILVER said...
on Jan. 23 2011 at 4:47 pm
CharlesDickens SILVER, Georgetown, Texas
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r u M. O. R. M. O. N.?  sry, server doesn't like that word
CharlesDickens SILVER said...
on Jan. 23 2011 at 4:44 pm
CharlesDickens SILVER, Georgetown, Texas
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L D S? possibly?  stereotyp.e I know
CharlesDickens SILVER said...
on Jan. 23 2011 at 4:43 pm
CharlesDickens SILVER, Georgetown, Texas
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ok, i meant it as a joke, but, r u M.o.rmon?
CharlesDickens SILVER said...
on Jan. 23 2011 at 4:43 pm
CharlesDickens SILVER, Georgetown, Texas
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Sry, this is kind of a stereotype, but a positive one.  M.ormon?  kind of meant it as a joke actually, I'm M.ormon, so... yah.
eagle said...
on Jan. 21 2011 at 9:01 pm
What?            
CharlesDickens SILVER said...
on Jan. 21 2011 at 8:01 pm
CharlesDickens SILVER, Georgetown, Texas
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Nice poem

I think I know what religion you are

 

Tiffanie_marie GOLD said...
on Jan. 21 2011 at 10:40 am
Tiffanie_marie GOLD, Sedro-Woolley, Washington
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I love this poem(:

I also like the shortness of it because what I did was begin to imagine what I am. What is "me". Keep writing please(:

 

p.s. check out my poetry!

HipsterUnicorn. BRONZE said...
on Jan. 21 2011 at 10:38 am
HipsterUnicorn. BRONZE, Pendleton, Oregon
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I like it, but maybe it's too simple?
Anonymousme GOLD said...
on Jan. 20 2011 at 9:27 am
Anonymousme GOLD, San Antonio, Texas
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John 3:16
For God so loved the world that he gave his one and only son so whoever believes in hill will not die but have eternal life.

Dreams are what make us who we are, a life without dreams is like a life without air.

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This is really neat, but I think if you could make it a little longer, and name some more things it would be better.
Skullcuffz SILVER said...
on Jan. 20 2011 at 8:25 am
Skullcuffz SILVER, Waupaca, Wisconsin
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I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity.
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i love it it made me smile.. i don't know if i was suppose to but i did.. (:
DrDoofenTess said...
on Jan. 20 2011 at 3:46 am
DrDoofenTess, Dubai, Other
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always had a trouble with writing simple stuff .... but u wrote here is very simple and still very deep ...

i can keep reading this over and over again n still feel different aspects of YOU opening up

looks like this is who u truly are ... and if it is then YOU are amazing :)