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Falling Wall

January 18, 2011
By GodsGirl36 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
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Seeing isn't believing. Believing is seeing.

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Cracked,




crumbling

Barely able to stand.










I cannot fall.

Broken,




sighing

Another piece falls.










I still stand.

Ancient,




fighting,

Here comes another hit.










I won't give in.

Unbreakable,




hoping,

A new day has arrived.










I'm still here.

© Deane M., Brookline, MA

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limelove said...
on Jan. 30 2011 at 5:08 pm
limelove, Gresham, Oregon
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It's good but need inprovements. they don't need to be that far way from each other the spaces i mean,theres other things too but that was a big one for me. BUT I srill love it.