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mistakes (i'm sorry)

January 19, 2011
By trapped-in-a-broken-wonderland PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
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trapped-in-a-broken-wonderland PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
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love in it'a essence is just spiritual fire

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i know i hurt you
i know it wasn't fair
i know you probably
hate me
but i made a mistake
and i'm sorry.
your not there
anymore
and i am
wishing you are
i miss you.
i'm sorry...

© Sarah D., Olean, NY

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trapped-in-a-broken-wonderland PLATINUM said...
on May. 27 2011 at 6:38 pm
trapped-in-a-broken-wonderland PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
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that's because it's not about the part where i had to break laws and the back ground info about santa
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on May. 27 2011 at 5:45 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

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and no one coulld've possibly inferred all that just by reading your poem alone.
trapped-in-a-broken-wonderland PLATINUM said...
on May. 26 2011 at 11:03 am
trapped-in-a-broken-wonderland PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
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I SHOULD"VE GONE DOWN THE CHIMANEY!!!

it would've been way less painful.......... *sigh* but it wouldn't have been as fun

no unfortunatly :( i forgot to install them there (it's really sad,i was trying to prevent creepy stalkers from entering and stealing all my cookies)

 

Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on May. 26 2011 at 8:39 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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maybe they slammed your door in your face and broke your window. what about the chimney, got any retina scanners in there?
trapped-in-a-broken-wonderland PLATINUM said...
on May. 25 2011 at 5:27 pm
trapped-in-a-broken-wonderland PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
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yeah but, if it's my house, i could just have it scan my retnas
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on May. 25 2011 at 4:21 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

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to continue the conversation
trapped-in-a-broken-wonderland PLATINUM said...
on May. 24 2011 at 3:13 pm
trapped-in-a-broken-wonderland PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
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if it's my house why'd i have to break in through a window? btw, broken glass hurts....
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on May. 24 2011 at 2:41 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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oh, well in that case i guess at least half of your poem is missing, since there was no visible door slam-ment to hinder the conversation.nice to hear you have an invisible house though, I'm happy for you.
trapped-in-a-broken-wonderland PLATINUM said...
on May. 24 2011 at 11:48 am
trapped-in-a-broken-wonderland PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
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yeah..... i really really  hate those invisible doors being slammed in my face..... especially when they're soundproof but it's okay, cuz i broke in throught the invisible window (it's kinda just a really invisible house)
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on May. 23 2011 at 7:21 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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looking over it again, i guess i mant the conversation. like, i dont know. maybe the door got slammed in your face or something.
trapped-in-a-broken-wonderland PLATINUM said...
on May. 23 2011 at 8:45 am
trapped-in-a-broken-wonderland PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
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in that case, then yes, it was over.

 

well kind of.... it's not like we're dead  yet or anything....

Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on May. 22 2011 at 6:17 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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de rien captain. and by not over i mean...well...anything that wasnt over.
trapped-in-a-broken-wonderland PLATINUM said...
on May. 22 2011 at 5:18 pm
trapped-in-a-broken-wonderland PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
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yes there was more to say to that particular person.... and it all depends on what your deffinition of "not over" is......

 

merci pour les commentaires! je vous en remercie!

Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on May. 21 2011 at 6:52 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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it is that i amliking this one. i like the sense of emotion and the last line and how it has those elipsis things. its like you had more to say cause this wasnt over. its not over is it cptain? 5 stars.