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Falling
Falling, falling death is calling
Death the deepest hole
Blinding, blinding, life unwinding
Heaven help my soul
Burning, burning I am burning
Forever into ash
Slowly, slowly ever slowly
Nothing ever lasts
Trying, trying sure not flying
My heart the sound of thunder
Faster, faster to meet the master
In the ground, six feet under
Turning, turning stomach churning
Silence the only sound
Going, going never knowing
When I’ll hit the ground
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You are so very welcome Alice!!! *huggles!* :D
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Pssshhhhhhawwwww, not like this, I don't. O.o XP
Hey, no prob. :) Just let me know if you ever want anything rated, commented on, whatever, I'll do it. Glad to. :)
D**m. That. Was. Amazing. O.o Whoa. Dude, I couldn't write something like this if you paid me to. I couldn't write to save my life. O.O Wow. 5 out of 5 hands down.
The only thing, I agree with another post, the 'in the ground, six feet under' is a bit of a mouthful. But whether you change it or leave like it is, it all flows very easily and smoothly. Great. Fantastic. Brilliant.
This is really amazing! I love it! The rhyming not every line, but every other one works really good with it and makes it flow better and kind of fall off the tonuge gracefully. Great job! 5/5
Feel free to rate/comment on any of my works!
-Angel