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February 1, 2011
By Witzman BRONZE, Houston, Texas
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Witzman BRONZE, Houston, Texas
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"i am not the messenger i am the message"

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I am an empty shell
Of what once was a man
All i can do
To end the pain
Is to look for my light
My love, I think your it

© Treza R., Kalispell, MT

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my best friend Neko
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Witzman BRONZE said...
on Nov. 20 2011 at 4:56 pm
Witzman BRONZE, Houston, Texas
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thanks a lot it came from the heart
xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE said...
on Apr. 4 2011 at 11:34 am
xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE, Godfrey, Illinois
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This!

I like how it's short and to the point. There's no need for fancy wordplay here. The message is clear, and the real deal.

*****<----- 5 Stars >D

Witzman BRONZE said...
on Mar. 9 2011 at 6:50 pm
Witzman BRONZE, Houston, Texas
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does anyone even like this? am i really that bad??