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February 7, 2011
By abby_lynn BRONZE, Salisbury, Maryland
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abby_lynn BRONZE, Salisbury, Maryland
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yesterday is behind you tomorrow will be a gift and today live like its your last day

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if i was to die
would you ever miss me
if i was to never breath again
would you breath for me
if i cut myself here
would you help me stop the bleeding
if i turned blue
would you try to save me
if i took my life
would you feel sorry for me
if i was to die
would you ever miss me

The author's comments:
this was about an ex of mine, i felt that i was used and wanted to write something darker then normal.i hope you all like it.
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abby_lynn BRONZE said...
on Feb. 20 2011 at 4:56 pm
abby_lynn BRONZE, Salisbury, Maryland
2 articles 0 photos 7 comments

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yesterday is behind you tomorrow will be a gift and today live like its your last day

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awe thank you guys and nice that you that you found me dark_kilala
Kilala_Dark_1 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 18 2011 at 9:02 am
Kilala_Dark_1 BRONZE, Salisbury, Maryland
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"As she looks down upon a shattered youth.
A shattered mirror shows a shattered truth."

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I WOULD! :)
Kimmy_Kerosene BRONZE said...
on Feb. 17 2011 at 4:18 pm
Kimmy_Kerosene BRONZE, Ormond Beach, Florida
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Forever Changeing & Always Becoming

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I can TOTALLY relate to this...I love it