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Promise me forever

February 7, 2011
By sunnylynn PLATINUM, Corinth, Maine
sunnylynn PLATINUM, Corinth, Maine
23 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't let people tell you who you can or can't be. The world is ours. All we need to do is take it.


Moonlight in your hair
Stars sparkling in your eyes
A feeling of love has replaced the air
And we're dancing in the sky

Please dont let me wake up
Please dont let this be a dream
I dont know if I could make it
If nothing was as it seemed

Your arms keep me from falling
Your smile takes my breath away
It's your name I keep calling
As I walk through the day

Please dont let this feeling stop
Hold me forever and longer
The demons in my life cant catch me
It's your love that makes me stronger

Each moment it gets harder
To picture my life without you
I need you to help me stand
Do you need me too?



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on Feb. 26 2011 at 6:39 am
sunnylynn PLATINUM, Corinth, Maine
23 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't let people tell you who you can or can't be. The world is ours. All we need to do is take it.

thank you for your feedback :) i guess sometimes i dont mind if it's just a dream, but sometimes i miss the feeling of it all being real

on Feb. 25 2011 at 10:07 pm
Hmmm....interesting. Almost sounds like "Yours" poems...(unfortuantely, the last 7 of the 10 were posted anonymously...) I understand how you feel. But for me, there was a difference. I didn't even care if it was a dream or not, as long as I could be by that person's side.