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Flood of Tears

February 14, 2011
By l.iney DIAMOND, Shrewsbury, Massachusetts
l.iney DIAMOND, Shrewsbury, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
100% of shots not taken won't go in. -Wayne Gretzky


Silence floods the room until it seems the world is empty,
the words replaying in our minds
how could it really be true?
How could the world still be in motion?
How could life still be flowing as steady as a river?
Even with the truth suddenly pouring out
and all of the secrets uncovering
and now finally we realize the flood is now of tears.
The silence has vanished into thin air
only replaced by the cries of mourn and love



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l.iney DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 7 2011 at 5:56 am
l.iney DIAMOND, Shrewsbury, Massachusetts
64 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
100% of shots not taken won't go in. -Wayne Gretzky

Thank you so much!

on Apr. 6 2011 at 8:40 pm
ripvansprinkle, West Chester, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Smash the mirrors but avoid the pieces." - B. McNally

LOVE!  So amazing!  Good job!!!

l.iney DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 15 2011 at 7:47 pm
l.iney DIAMOND, Shrewsbury, Massachusetts
64 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
100% of shots not taken won't go in. -Wayne Gretzky

thanks please do read more i have like 22 things on the site

on Mar. 15 2011 at 9:57 am
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Omg! I so loved the poem a whole lot. It made me cry and my rating for your poem is 5 out of 5 just to let you know. :)

MarenaFleury said...
on Mar. 14 2011 at 8:13 am
Beautiful.

l.iney DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 11 2011 at 6:57 pm
l.iney DIAMOND, Shrewsbury, Massachusetts
64 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
100% of shots not taken won't go in. -Wayne Gretzky

thanks for reading

JuStMe.DeZZi said...
on Mar. 11 2011 at 2:56 pm
JuStMe.DeZZi, NA, Other
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Great poem, it's really descriptive and intense. Your imagery is very impressive, I wouldn't mind reading more of your stuff.

on Mar. 11 2011 at 2:56 pm
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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I really like your poem a whole lot. It even made me cry some just by reading it. But it was really good, and I hope you will write some more poems soon. :)