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A Train Ride

February 15, 2011
By Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments

I met you on the train,
heading downtown,
I remember the day was full of rain,
and I never thought I'd see you frown,

you smiled so wide,
your eyes ice blue,
I laughed so hard I cried,
but time flew,

it was a short ride,
and we filled it with chat,
but, we had to say our good-byes,
and I didn't see you after that.


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on Apr. 1 2011 at 7:20 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
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Thanks! :)

leafy said...
on Apr. 1 2011 at 6:44 pm
leafy, City, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Gil: I would like you to read my novel and get your opinion. 
Ernest Hemingway: I hate it. 
Gil: You haven't even read it yet. 
Ernest Hemingway: If it's bad, I'll hate it. If it's good, then I'll be envious and hate it even more. You don't want the opinion of another writer. 

nice poem! it was short, but sweet. keep up the good work!

on Mar. 24 2011 at 5:25 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments
Thank you so much!

on Mar. 24 2011 at 4:27 pm
Paige101 BRONZE, Easley, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"It was the first time we ever played in Illinois, yet the 50-60 kids there were singing along to our tunes like they’d been fans all their lives." -A Day To Remember

Your work is so amazing. I can't help but love it.

on Mar. 21 2011 at 3:50 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments
Thanks! :D

on Mar. 21 2011 at 12:53 pm
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

Wow, amazing! I loved everything about this piece starting with the rythum all the way to the story behind the words! Nice job.