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Callous Freak

March 13, 2011
By Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.


A half-carton of ice cream? Really?
Well, you just killed the pancreas there buddy.
I’d like you to know that all of us aren’t nearly
As stuffed and bloated as you are.
This was meant to be a family social event,
But I suppose we can make this all about you.
I’m so sorry to hear your moving back to Ohio
Well, not really, since everyone wants you gone.
You’re makeup looks terrible by the way,
Like teardrops speeding past your eyeliner
Racing down the sides of your cheek.
I bet he saved the ring for the other woman.
So, while your filth ruins my brand new sofa
You can share all your pathetic sob stories
And I can try my best to pretend I care.
Please don’t bother asking how I’ve been
Or pretend to act interested in me at all.
Remember, its not about me, its all about you.


The author's comments:
Please do commentate captain. If you dont like it, please say WHY. I am loving the inputism. I didn't really feel the need to explain this one, I thought it was obvious, unless the definition of obvious has changed in the last 325 years. It would be conducive for you to do your dance at the time which is now.

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on Jul. 5 2011 at 11:56 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

well, if the meaning is really obvious then it cant stay on the ocean floor for long cause its really not that dep right? so i guess all the stupid eels an go away now. merci for the comment captain. fait ta danse.

on Jul. 5 2011 at 11:54 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

well, since i forgot what the heck we were talking about....i do now wonder if my interpo changes along with my mood.you dont believe i've commentatedr on over a hundred poems? someone breaks the record...

on Jul. 2 2011 at 2:32 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

I couldn't decide whether to laugh or to cry, so I compromised by shrieking quietly then rolling around on the floor with my hands over my eyes. But it's all poetry, really. Brilliant, brilliant poetry. The last line was a perfect transition from dry sarcasm to the verge of a nervous breakdown. FIVE STARS!

Please send me your mind in a tightly sealed envelope; I would love to dissect it, if you don't mind, of course.


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on Jun. 21 2011 at 11:14 am
CarolynQ GOLD, Manalapan, New Jersey
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Once again I find myself laughing, I can totally see this scene being played out within my mind. Typical to maybe hear about but unique to write about and a great use of description.

on Jun. 8 2011 at 11:37 am
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2216 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

INteresting. It sinks deep, like the titanic. Will it stay at the ocean floor, to be inhabited be sharks and eels?

Does one have to be bitter to write like a bitter-er?


on May. 24 2011 at 11:43 am
trapped-in-a-broken-wonderland PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
love in it'a essence is just spiritual fire

yeah yeah yeah, that's what they all say lol *continues to pout*

on May. 23 2011 at 7:20 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

do you have any idea how many articlei've commentated on(no)? how could i...i could never. i guess its more of a "from here on" sort of thing. great suggestion though.

on May. 23 2011 at 8:46 am
trapped-in-a-broken-wonderland PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
love in it'a essence is just spiritual fire

but why??? *pout-y face* such a dissappointment

on May. 22 2011 at 6:16 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

ha. and sit back and watch as the comets race our children to the end of the horizon. it'll never happen...capain.

 


on May. 22 2011 at 5:09 pm
trapped-in-a-broken-wonderland PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
love in it'a essence is just spiritual fire

only if you want too.... lmao that sounds really really time consuming.... but GO FOR IT!! it could be fun. :)

on May. 20 2011 at 7:54 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

well, since you said that, i guess i can go reread everyrhing i've ever read on teenink while my moods alternate.

on May. 20 2011 at 1:38 pm
trapped-in-a-broken-wonderland PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
love in it'a essence is just spiritual fire

well see, i re-read it now and it seems kinda comical (in a sarcastic kinda way) and more laid back and stuff then from when i read it before, but i'm in a completly different mood then from the first time i read it..... it's still awesome, and relatable!!!! 

(i think that the mood a person's in when they read something affects a LOT about how the interperate)


on May. 19 2011 at 8:50 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

really? everyone is saying that...that it sounds bitter or angry,-suprising. i thought it was laidback but kind of dry. guess i dont kow how i look through your eyes. OMG!!! I totally love you for commentating on my work!!!

on May. 19 2011 at 5:31 pm
trapped-in-a-broken-wonderland PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
30 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
love in it'a essence is just spiritual fire

this seems really..... bitter... the narrator seems angry and hurt...... but it's amazing (as usual...) :)

on Apr. 18 2011 at 9:09 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

you're so awesome captain. merci tres beacoup. i love your mentioning of the monkey.

on Apr. 16 2011 at 3:50 pm
smilebright BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"Your only in trouble if you get caught"- Aladdin

a long time ago u posted a coment on my work so im doing the same for u.

you sound angry. like this person hurt you. i like it. its so... real. do you dance captian and dont get blinded by the monkey