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~Slowely Breaking~

March 10, 2011
By SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!


Inside of me I'm slowly breaking. It doesn't show in my eyes, my face. I tremble and shake but no body knows why. No body knows that I am slowly breaking inside. I am hurt SO bad, but no body ever sees it in my eyes.
I cry in fear to hope not to break completely. My tears fall slowly, silently. But yet no body ever notices my cries. Inside me it's a mess, a catastrophe. I only wish I could find a way to replenish my old self, to be happy and whole again.
The seize of pain paralysis me all the way to my soul. I can't seem to get to the light on the other side, it just gets further and further away. People can't see my sanity becoming less and less. They can't see the restraint this pain has on me and my life. They can't see the will power I had once had, has faded away, has went void.
So I'm slowly breaking inside. I feel as though I am losing myself. But yet again as I tremble and shake I can't forget what a wonderful happy life I once had. Yet again no body can see it in my eyes. No body knows that I am paralysed with hurt all the way to my soul.


The author's comments:
My feelings partly helped me write this piece. Like it says "I'm slowly Breaking." I hope people will understand this.

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on May. 2 2012 at 9:16 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Awe, thanks so much!! y'all are soo sweet!!:D

on May. 2 2012 at 9:03 am
Zoe-22-Turner DIAMOND, Beverly, Massachusetts
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haha i agree with vidra on that line, thats my favorite. it's a beautiful piece, honestly, very sad though in a wonderful way. keep writing

on Apr. 26 2011 at 11:07 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Oh wow! Thanks:) I'm glad you really liked this poem! It took me a while to finally finish this one.. and yea I realize that now about the breaking of the lines, actually I just figured out how to do that on here and I wrote this piece before I figured it out..Ha... There is nothing more that I love to do than keep writing; this is my dream and my life!:D

Vidra PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 25 2011 at 2:53 pm
Vidra PLATINUM, Midlothian, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
“I write only because
There is a voice within me
That will not be still.”
-Sylvia Plath

I liked this poem a lot! The only thing I would change is the way you wrote it. Maybe if you broke it up into stanzas it would flow nicer. Other than that, beautiful poetry! And keep writing! :) Fave Lines:

"I can't seem to get to the light on the other side, it just gets further and further away."