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On the edge

March 17, 2011
By Tomboy GOLD, Broken Arrow, Oklahoma
Tomboy GOLD, Broken Arrow, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"The human heart had hidden treasures; in secret kept; in silence sealed; the thoughts; the hopes; the dreams; the pleasures; whose charms were broken if revealed" - Charlotte Bronte

My mouth tastes like vile
I cant get the taste out
I can't see straight
My visions blurry from the tears
My whole body is shaking
So violently it hurts
My shoulders are hunched
Back hurting
I scream into my pillow
I need to hear his voice
I need to feel his touch
Something from him
To calm my nerves
To let me breathe right
And not choke on the bile
I'm begging
Don't leave me on my own
Don't leave me on the edge
Don't leave me unbalanced
Not again
I don't know if I'll make it out alive
A second time

The author's comments:
It sums up a lot of stuff

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on Sep. 2 2011 at 6:36 pm
sunny.all.day. GOLD, Potomac, Maryland
15 articles 0 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day so I never have to live without you."
— A.A. Milne (Winnie-the-Pooh)
"writing is a struggle against silence" carlos fuentos
You miss 100% of the shots you don't take."

hi :) this is good. it sounds kind of like your venting though? i don't mean to judge, just an observation. one thing tho- the first line u wrote 'tastes like vile' but it should be 'tastes vile' ... sorry if u find that rude or something o.O